persuasive paragraph

Two day's ago ,Tum and I wrote a persuasive paragraph about football shoes. Here it is:

I want buy football shoes. To start with, I love playing football. I play footbal with my friends everyday, but I would enjoy it more if I had football shoes. Also, I will get injuired if I don't have shoes. When I kick a ball, I will hurt my toes or may be raining or perhaps I will fall over.All in all, please buy football shoes for me.